I love korea !
Well,I am gonna write about:"If you could visit anywhere in the world, where would you go?"My respond: Well! I really want to go to korea! Cause I love korea a lot, from their kimchi ; korea clothes and korea band ! Like A.N.JELL , Super Junior , SS501 and SHINee. Well, another reason is that I have NEVER experience winter ... I really want to experience winter and see my Idols ! Which i know is impossible ! Well , I wish i can go there with my family during the June holiday . I love korea because we can get to meet different places and comminicate with people from other countries . We can see different things and experience the glory of the 4 seasons and SNOW ! Lastly , we can lear the culture of korea and enjoy it ! In conclusion< my dream is to go to korea! My dream will become true because NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE ! ;D
posted by ---JIAx3 at
9:18 PM
1 Comments:
A few mistakes :
(line 2) My responce: ,(line3),"because" not cause ! , (line 3) Korea's clothes & Korea's band ! , ( line5) Experienced Winter , (line6&7 ) you forgot capslock ! , (line8) you can't meet places ,you visit them . , (2nd last line )In my conclusion .
Cool , I like your dream and hope you can reach it ! Good Job !
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